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Posted by on 2013/11/22 under Uncategorized

I’m living a life that makes me be fake
I’m living a life that punishes for every mistake
I’m living a life that hurts me everyday
how much do I have to pray to get away
Soon I’m gonna run out of ways to stay
and when that happens don’t feel bad
I know that no one cares and I’m not sad
I have to deal with my s***ty life
and that might leave to using the knife
this is my final goodbye
its time for me to finally die
*I wrote this poem about my life. dont worry im not planning to kill myself. I just wrote all my emotions down and made this. please comment any feedback on it. I really want to know if its good or not. thank you.*

2 thoughts on “poem

  1. Destiny says:

    Yeah, the poem is good. The poem kinda describe what I am feeling right now and what I wanted to do these few days.

  2. Anonymous says:

    This is beautiful, really, you can be proud of you ! I feel totally the same as you and your poem makes me cry so much but this is a good thing. You’re very talented, continue on this way

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