Posted by Anonymous on 2017/03/26 under Friends once there lived a girl named fire blue she had a sister named water blue they lived in a castle. one day the evil fire cast a evil spell on water blue they evil over came her she turned evil she tried to kill her sister but the guards locked her up and for 8 years the end of the week she escaped they tried to find her put they din’t find her one day the princess fire blue sole the big fight Aaron got badly injured fire blue toke him to the clinic in the castle to get better fire blue loved Aaron Aaron loved fire blue but Aaron was here guard one day they went to the lady Irene’s portal the portal gave her a poison scare on her right eye Aaron new that water blue did this then he turned in to in to demon Aaron his eyes were red he had wind he had a black hood the sword of a demon then water blue had the cure he took his sword and the big fight Aaron won fire blue was saved.
love syd
I appreciate your story line but do include punctuations in your sentences.
I was never a fan of punctuations and still wasn’t. However, I try hard to improve it.